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Video: Vespa Haiku

July 27, 2020 by Scooter in the Sticks 24 Comments

A poem of seventeen syllables on a morning with my scooter.

A glimpse of a Vespa Ride

The 10th video I’ve produced for Scooter in the Sticks.

I’ve decided to continue experimenting with this media. And of course, continue to post photographs and text from riding experiences.

For this entry, I was interested in how short I could construct something that still had meaning.

The Vespa haiku text:

My silver machine
Morning fog softly whispers
I continue on

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Comments

  1. amateriat says

    July 27, 2020 at 1:20 am

    I have to tell you
    This “less is more” stuff just rocks
    Keep up the good work

    Reply
    • Steve Williams says

      July 27, 2020 at 10:42 am

      Thanks. I’m just beginning to imagine the possibilities with video. Just need to bridge the gap between idea and construction.

      Reply
    • Steve Williams says

      July 27, 2020 at 1:33 pm

      It’s so different than my at times long-winded narrative text and photo-based posts.

      Reply
  2. Don Etheredge says

    July 27, 2020 at 6:38 am

    Wow!!! Thanks, you rock man!!!

    Reply
    • Steve Williams says

      July 27, 2020 at 1:32 pm

      I appreciate the support. Thank you.

      Reply
  3. Karl Stumpf says

    July 27, 2020 at 9:00 am

    Continue on my friend.

    Reply
    • Steve Williams says

      July 27, 2020 at 1:32 pm

      I plan to Karl.

      Reply
  4. Jim Zeiser says

    July 27, 2020 at 11:22 am

    I’m waiting for your next haiku:

    My Blue machine
    Front wheel pointed skyward
    Back tire smoking

    Reply
    • Steve Williams says

      July 27, 2020 at 1:31 pm

      Oh no, I hope that haiku isn’t in my future! I can read that as an aggressive ride, or a post-crash scene. Either makes me squirm.

      Reply
  5. David W. Dill says

    July 27, 2020 at 11:46 am

    I see that you have come to a fork in the road with your comments. And so I say, “adieu” as I have to take the other fork. I have enjoyed your previous writings and thoughts on scootering but cannot go down the path your are taking. Stay safe on your scooter rides.

    Reply
    • Steve Williams says

      July 27, 2020 at 1:28 pm

      Enlighten me? Not sure what fork you are referring to?

      From my perspective, I plan to still write narrative pieces with photographs from rides on both the Vespa and the BMW. And also post a video every two weeks or so.

      Regardless, best wishes on whatever journey you decide to take.

      Reply
  6. Dieter says

    July 27, 2020 at 3:11 pm

    I’m assuming the Hawkwind reference is a coincidence? 🙂

    Reply
    • Steve Williams says

      July 27, 2020 at 4:42 pm

      Since I had to look up Hawkwind, I would have to say whatever reference you’re referring to is a coincidence. If I were making a reference, it would more likely be to Nick Cave and the Bad Seeds!

      Seriously though, what is the reference?

      Reply
      • Dieter says

        July 27, 2020 at 6:31 pm

        They have a song called ‘Silver Machine’, iirc it was about a bicycle. I got reminded of the song by your video. It must have been 15 years or so since I heard it.

        Reply
        • Steve Williams says

          July 27, 2020 at 7:24 pm

          I don’t know that song. I’ll have to investigate.

          There is a song that reminds me of my Vespa. It’s a song by Low call “Silver Rider.”

          Reply
  7. David Masse says

    July 27, 2020 at 4:46 pm

    Nice Steve.

    Reply
    • Steve Williams says

      July 27, 2020 at 7:22 pm

      Thanks David.

      Reply
  8. Tom says

    July 28, 2020 at 9:52 am

    Nicely done. I enjoy writing haiku myself so this was a real treat.

    Reply
  9. Paul Ruby says

    July 28, 2020 at 11:57 am

    I’m guessing you are stretching outside your comfort zone sone, taking some risk, doing what you feel strongest about. In the process of doing that did you feel more present and awake? That would be an extension of scooter riding- to experience peace and connection.

    Reply
    • Steve Williams says

      July 29, 2020 at 11:42 am

      It’s not so much moving outside my comfort zone as it is exploring an alternative method to communicate. By adding sound and video it opens a door to sharing a more emotive message. At least that’s what I’m thinking.

      While everything I share on Scooter in the Sticks is my opinion, I try to avoid telling people what they should or should not do. Expect with winter riding in the snow — don’t do that.

      Right now making a video is an exercise in ideation and thought. That’s enough for now. Like other things in my life, I’ll continue until it ceases having value to me. Like shaving and getting my hair cut!

      Reply
  10. andyheckathorne says

    July 29, 2020 at 11:38 am

    There’s something about the constraints of using new or different tools that seems to foster creativity. I could be wrong, but sense and appreciate this in these new formats you are exploring. I would agree with Paul that this could include a measure of risk, reminiscent of the risks of riding a scooter or motorcycle.

    I’d like to add that something I admire about your work is the sense that you don’t try and talk over the scenes your portray. You seem to intentionally get out of the way while also bringing insights that we the viewers may have otherwise missed. It feels authentic. The unvarnished sights and sounds of nature in this video are just beautiful.

    Reply
    • Steve Williams says

      July 29, 2020 at 12:37 pm

      I agree with you Andy about the power of constraints. Some of my best work emerged from constraints of time, tools, or form. Perhaps these videos are another example of just that.

      I don’t feel any risk in anything I shoot or create that’s akin to riding a scooter or motorcycle. Apples and oranges.

      You’re right in your assessment that I don’t want to talk over the scenes portrayed. The same is true of the text and image posts. Not completely sure of the mechanics at work, but I do tend to keep things low key.

      I was hoping the camera would record the sounds I was hearing when I shot the video clip. Early in the morning the forest echoes with bird song.

      Reply
  11. Floyd Jasinski says

    July 31, 2020 at 12:09 am

    Scooter in the Sticks
    My inspiration to ride
    Senses come alive

    Well done, Steve.

    Reply
    • Steve Williams says

      August 1, 2020 at 5:39 pm

      Thank you for sharing your haiku Floyd. It’s the first I know of that was inspired by Scooter in the Sticks!

      Reply

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